Thursday, October 18, 2007

hitler

Hello.. i am goint to be talking about Adolf Hitler.. he was born like a regular child except his father was a hard worknig man and was rarely home.. when he reached the age of about seven he had 2 sisters and an older brother... when he was around 10 his father had just gotten home. And this meant more dicsipline. his older brother was beaten on a regular basis, and when his brother was 14 he ran away from home never to come back. when hitler was at the age of 12 he picked up on education. reading almost 10 books in one week. when he was 15 he noticed he had a talent in drawing buildings in detail, but only seeing them once. He was to into his education to let hormones get in the way, but he had one love of his life, i dont know what her name was, but he wrote her many love poems, but never gave them to her, he would spend his time day dreaming about him and her, and he was furious when he saw her show any interests in any other men.bye the time he was 18 he was accepted into the military, to protect his fatherland. Hitler had a knack for being lucky, he moved from a place that only moments after a shell landed killing others. he was promoted to corpal, Corpral Adolf Hitler. he would watch the battles rage on. until one day his luck ran out. he was hit bye shrapnel of a shell, wounded and after being in the hospital he fought again, until he was blinded bye british mustard gas. nearly dying, he was blinded and limp for 3 days. In 1918 the war ended and when hitler was told, he blamed the politicians, mainly the Jews, this is where hitlers hate for the jews came into play, and soon lead to one of the most horrific event in history. in 1920 hitler was still enraged at politisions for ending the war when they could hae fought on and won.. hitler then went home, with a greeting from his family. He went to a meeting once.. and they digusted how the german government stopped the war when they could have fought on. this meeting was in the beer hall. where hitler would soon try to pursuade the german politicians into giving him the german father land...........i will continue this blog tomarrow

1 comment:

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